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My Bunny By:Olivia

I had a bunny

It’sname was sunny

He turned into a gummy

i THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY

But his muumy was a roll of money

sunny paded me to stop laughing

Hate By:Olivia

HATE

stabs you

in the heart

with a plaid sharp as tick.

Lonley and

dead

it leaves you

alone

in the spot light in

a black room

with no one there

but you

Best Friends By:Olivia

My best friend is like

heaven on earth

she is there for me 24 7

Thick and thin

bad or good

she is my best friend

Susane

in Denmark

but still close

in my heart

I miss

and I am

crying

Stinky Feet By:Olivia

I have stinky feet

no matter what

they wreak

odour all around

take off my shoes

ther is a

frown

P.S. Last year was true but now I wear socks– do not worry.

Love-By Mary

Love

Love is like a

Cloud

You can live on it

Breathe on it

And

Get broken on it

But

Love will be here forever

And you

Me

And

Everyone knows what love

Is

Katy’s poem “Red roses, red roses”

Valentine

red roses, red roses

chocolates and candy

make valentines day

ever so dandy!

Valentine’s Day Chocolate( a poem) By: Pauline

Sweet Sweet

Chocolate

melting in my mouth…

like a creamy love

from your parent.

like a rain from the

candy land……that

hardend in the wind…

sweet like a candy cane

from the Christmas elf…

with some icing on top..

Happy Valentine’s Day !

Yummy yum yum    >.<

Valentine’s Day by Ty

Oh Man!

It’s a boy’s worst

Nightmare

Valentine’s Day

But there is lots of treats

Worst of all

You have to talk about feelings

Oh Man!

Cupid what are you doing here

Why are you pulling your arrow back?

ZONG!

That arrow poked my butt

I don’t feel very good

Sword in the stone by Ty

There the sword lay

Stuck in the stone like a man stuck in quicksand

But my arms

Tight on the hilt

YANK!

The Magnificent blade

Was stuck no more

With a new king

Bombs Away! By Tim

Bombs Away! By Tim

I am a soldier

And I have to stop bombs

From exploding all over the state of Texas

The timer is set on 60 seconds

I have no time to lose

I try disassembling the bombs

but they are heavily armored

I try to take them somewhere else

but there are too many

I try to roll them away

But they are too heavy

Beep…. Beep…..beep

Goes the timer

I have 10 seconds left!

9….8….7….

There is nothing left to do

But run

Fast!

I speed across the battle field

And I sprint across the plains

Without stopping the take a break and rest

3…2…1…

Then silence

But I keep on running

Then all of a sudden

Bang!

Boom!

Crash!

Explode!

I soon see fire in the distance behind me

Coming after me

I run even faster

I run as fast as my legs can carry me

But the fire runs faster

And then I trip and fall on the grass

The fire comes charging at me

And then….

Tim!

My mom calls from downstairs

Stop popping those balloons

I’m trying to watch TV here!

And yet

Another mission success by Tim