The Nature……(a poem) By: Pauline
Cloud…
Light as a feaher..
floating slowly..
in the sky like a sweet sweet cotton
candy…….
The wind is blowing…
The sun is so warm.. . .
The grass is soft..
and warm.. . …
The water is cold..
with the real nature
wind..
and view….
I felt as… sleep…. z z zzz
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February 14th, 2009 at 4:58 am
I loved your poem. The picture made me stare at it. Your poem made me want to go want side. I can not wait until you your next poem.
February 15th, 2009 at 1:56 am
Beautifully written, Pauline! This poem reminds me of summers in Canada. I loved your word choice and use of similes. Well done!
Miss B.